IB English B HL · Paper 1 · Writing

Figure out what the task wants before you write.

In Paper 1 you're writing a text, not analyzing one. That means a lot of your score is decided before you write a word. Did you read the prompt closely enough to know who you're writing to? Did you pick a text type you can actually pull off? Did you plan three ideas you can develop, instead of six you can only mention? This page helps with all three.

This is all for practice. Nothing you type or tick is saved or sent anywhere, so do the drills as many times as you want.

The shape of the paper

1task you answer
30marks
90minutes

There are three tasks, and you pick one. Each one gives you a situation, a purpose, an audience, and a choice of text types. So your first two decisions are: which task do you have ideas for, and which text type can you keep up from start to finish?

How it is marked

There are three criteria, 30 marks in total. Language and Message are worth 12 each, and Conceptual understanding is worth 6. If you know which criterion a choice affects, you'll know where your checking time is best spent.

CriterionMarksWhat the examiner is looking forWhat earns marks here
A
Language
12 The range and accuracy of your vocabulary and grammar, and whether the language you have chosen suits the task you were given. Varied sentence structures, precise word choice, and control of tense. Accuracy matters a great deal, although a response that plays it safe and stays error-free will usually score lower than one that reaches for something harder and slips once or twice along the way.
B
Message
12 Whether your ideas answer the task, whether they are developed rather than simply listed, and whether they are organized so that a reader can follow the line of thought. Two or three ideas explored properly, since they will always score higher than six ideas mentioned in passing, together with cohesive devices that signal a real relationship between one idea and the next.
C
Conceptual understanding
6 Whether you chose an appropriate text type and handled its conventions, and whether register, tone, context and audience are right and stay right the whole way through. This is the criterion the text type library exists for: getting the conventions on the page, sounding like the person the task made you, and speaking to the reader the task named rather than drifting toward whoever is easiest to write to.

Where marks usually go missing

  • The text type is announced but never performed. A response headed "Blog" that reads like an essay will lose marks on criterion C however good the English underneath it is.
  • The audience drifts. You begin by addressing the school board, and by the third paragraph, without ever deciding to, you are writing to your classmates instead.
  • Register slips under pressure. Contractions and casual phrasing tend to work their way into a formal report somewhere in the middle, once concentration has moved on to content.
  • Ideas are listed rather than developed. Every paragraph introduces something new and nothing gets explained, which is the most common weakness in timed writing and the easiest one to plan your way out of.
  • The word count is ignored. Falling under the minimum is penalized, and running well over it usually means the planning stage was skipped.
  • The context is dropped. When a task tells you where the text will appear, that setting is part of what is being assessed, so a speech written for an assembly should sound like something delivered in a hall rather than something read off a page.